Lady Berlitz

I don’t want to be too harsh, as you asked, but I want to help you improve, so I think your coloring is pretty good. However I find your line work, especially on the face is a little off. Although seeing as this is a new program for you it’s absolutely forgivable. But, my biggest problem with this is the angle of the face, as it looks extremely awkward, I recommend using a facial angle reference for this. Also the blush on the face, but that’s just my preference. In the end though, I think it’s a well put together piece, and I will always appreciate the effort someone puts into a picture.